A world unseen
Until in your eyes I was born
Among your daydreams of
the places that fill your thoughts
with the joys of lighter days
than these
A soul unfelt
Until in your hands I was made
Among your impressions of
the traces that fill your pores
with the touches of warmer days
than these
A heart unreal
Until in your mouth I was forged
Among your illusions of
the chases that fill your tongue
with the cravings of longer days
than these
A life unsure
Until in your name I was found
Among your expectations of
the faces that fill your hopes
with the promises of better days
than these
Excellent. Great use of cadence (the good twin of repetition).
BeantwoordenVerwijderenThanks, sis. I thought it was about time I introduce some poetry to my blog. I'm sure I'll post some more from time to time. ;)
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